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Question: What do you think of it?  (Voting closed: May 28, 2007)
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« Reply #20 on: June 22, 2007 »

I grew up by detriot, michigan, but left and relocated to kosciusko, mississippi. All people are intitled to there opioion, but as far as calling someone trash is just wrong. No one has the right to judge but GOD. I didn't ask for what happened to me. I was born into that situation. My parents and the few white people in my life as a child degrated, abused, mistreated, and simply left me to defend myself at a very young age. The black folks around me not just the drug dealers were very kind to me. I can't change what happened.   

Of course you can't change it. Moreover you have to be proud of yourself. I believe you are very strong person.
We have no right to split our society on blacks and whites. There are good and evil among everybody.
We are the people, we are humans, let's don't forget about that.
I believe that diversity has made our country to be a world superpower.
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« Reply #21 on: June 22, 2007 »

With your reply, I put you in the category as my parents, period!!! You are in-titled to your opinion, but does not change the facts of my true story.

Hahaha  Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley
What is a "peroid", can you explain?

I believe you that you have true story, but what? Such people with similar life style are trash. That's my opinion. And you don't reject my words.

Period means just what it is "period". Your words are just to be hurtful. I don't pay any attention to someone that has a narrow point of view just because the color of someones skin. I don't reject your words because it is called here in the United States freedom of speech ( 1st amendment). I've learned to look pass this type of person very narrow minded. All people are different in many ways not just color of skin. Just to blame black people for crime is just plain ignorant!
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« Reply #22 on: June 22, 2007 »

Martin Luther King was shot and he was shot for his great deeds!
Martin Luther King was right in his every word.

 Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin
Especially for you, I've found in the internet a brilliant site about Martin Luther King:
http://www.martinlutherking.org/
Prepare to discover the truth about him
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« Reply #23 on: June 22, 2007 »

I study ML King in my history class in college as well as many others 4.0 GPA!!!
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« Reply #24 on: June 22, 2007 »

Period means just what it is "period". Your words are just to be hurtful. I don't pay any attention to someone that has a narrow point of view just because the color of someones skin. I don't reject your words because it is called here in the United States freedom of speech ( 1st amendment). I've learned to look pass this type of person very narrow minded. All people are different in many ways not just color of skin. Just to blame black people for crime is just plain ignorant!

You wrote "peroid" and I thought it is a slang word, some kind of slang expression to offend me.
I don't think I'm narrow minded. And I don't blame black people for crime. It's not me. It's statistics. Black commit crime in 5-10 times more than whites. Often it is their main source of income. You know about black much more than me so I suppose you will prove it?
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« Reply #25 on: June 22, 2007 »

Period means just what it is "period". Your words are just to be hurtful. I don't pay any attention to someone that has a narrow point of view just because the color of someones skin. I don't reject your words because it is called here in the United States freedom of speech ( 1st amendment). I've learned to look pass this type of person very narrow minded. All people are different in many ways not just color of skin. Just to blame black people for crime is just plain ignorant!

You wrote "peroid" and I thought it is a slang word, some kind of slang expression to offend me.
I don't think I'm narrow minded. And I don't blame black people for crime. It's not me. It's statistics. Black commit crime in 5-10 times more than whites. Often it is their main source of income. You know about black much more than me so I suppose you will prove it?

I love to prove you wrong this weekend but right know I gotta go to work!! But I will be back to elaborate!!!
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« Reply #26 on: June 22, 2007 »

I study ML King in my history class in college as well as many others 4.0 GPA!!!

Do you study now or you have studied?
If you study now - this site will be very helpful 4 u.  Wink Wink

But is it true that your GPA is 4.0 and your writing is ... not perfect (You know it and you have confessed it already)
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« Reply #27 on: June 22, 2007 »

I love to prove you wrong this weekend but right know I gotta go to work!! But I will be back to elaborate!!!

Ok, I'll be waiting for your proofs
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« Reply #28 on: June 22, 2007 »

There is no reason to argue  Wink
The truth is in the middle  Wink
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« Reply #29 on: July 24, 2007 »

Carolyn, why you have chosen this topic to right a book about? I don't read books about blacks, drugs and violence. These are bad things we observe in everyday life. I think a good book should entertain and somehow divert reader’s attention away from “real life negative”.

This is my real true story, yes. My parents where horrible. As a child, I was locked in a room with 3 other siblings, 5 gallon bucket w/toilet paper, no food or water for many hours at a time then left with babysitters that loved to stick a vacuum hose up my privates these are just a few stories. As an teenage, i was left to defend myself on the streets.  I witness murder and many other things growing up. I've read many stories of women that have made it through very bad situations but not quite like mine.  I have made it drug free, 4.0 GPA college nursing student, work fulltime, and fairly successful. I truly give my props to the couple of drug boys that showed me the ropes and defended me from my parents and the streets. I kinda liked having a adopted ghettofied Tony Soprano looking out for me. I know I have to improve my writing but the stories are the same. I am taking writing classes now to help. Some stories can show light to bad situations, inspirations that there is a way out, and a happy life is possible!!!!  Grin
You are not allowed call Russians as 'Russ', nor niggers as 'Negro', what you are allowed,is; gentlemen
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« Reply #30 on: July 24, 2007 »

As for the "Negro" it is clear.
But I don't understand why is it bad to call Russians "Russ"? Isn't it the way them call themselves?
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« Reply #31 on: August 03, 2007 »

i do not know what part of the world arther is leaving in, but he definately proves that he is a complete ignorant idiot.

i'm south african, and am black, a negro if that's what you would like to call me. i am 22 years old, studying medicine, and am a published poet. if you could only spare a few moments from vomiting those racist comments out of your mouth, please pick up a few books and you will see how many black great writers are there.

and as for the crime in Europe, they are just there to reclaim what your grandfathers stole from us.read a few history books and you will learn the crimes of your forefathers.those poor souls in europe disturbing your english piece are only a minority of who black pleople are.

and from my own personal experience leaving in a black and white community,the only advantage that you receive from being white  is you have 100% more risk of getting skin cancer.

as for your advice for Carolyn, everyone knows that losers (by that i mean those writers who cannot even catch one rundown publisher's attention) give destructive critism.get with the program and write your own book.LOSER.people like you inhibit global growth.and you'll die with not even a single library proudly showcasing your work!correct my spelling englishman,jeez


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« Reply #32 on: August 06, 2007 »

Welcome Lera!
My grandfarthers didn't stole anything from you and I hope so did arther's grandfarthers.
It's great that you are published poet, what publications do you have?
Can you provide links to your poetry if it available online? I think it would be interesting for our forum community.
I haven't been to Africa but I will visit it - it would be South Africa. North Africa is Arabic and Middle Africa as I know regularly have wars, however South Africa (it's where Nelson Mandela was) is the most civilized.
Cheers
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« Reply #33 on: August 28, 2007 »

As for the "Negro" it is clear.
But I don't understand why is it bad to call Russians "Russ"? Isn't it the way them call themselves?
Better late than never. Yes, there is something very difficult to explain, For example, you are right they call themselves as ’ruskie, ruski, and it is the right term, The insult is  always  in the spirit to utter it when call them as ryssä, or russa, however it depend on occasion in which the word is used.
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« Reply #34 on: August 28, 2007 »

i do not know what part of the world arther is leaving in, but he definately proves that he is a complete ignorant idiot.

i'm south african, and am black, a negro if that's what you would like to call me. i am 22 years old, studying medicine, and am a published poet. if you could only spare a few moments from vomiting those racist comments out of your mouth, please pick up a few books and you will see how many black great writers are there.

and as for the crime in Europe, they are just there to reclaim what your grandfathers stole from us.read a few history books and you will learn the crimes of your forefathers.those poor souls in europe disturbing your english piece are only a minority of who black pleople are.

and from my own personal experience leaving in a black and white community,the only advantage that you receive from being white  is you have 100% more risk of getting skin cancer.

as for your advice for Carolyn, everyone knows that losers (by that i mean those writers who cannot even catch one rundown publisher's attention) give destructive critism.get with the program and write your own book.LOSER.people like you inhibit global growth.and you'll die with not even a single library proudly showcasing your work!correct my spelling englishman,jeez

Very good Lera, blow them back, let them know where from the wind is blowing. This kind of skinheads call themselves as white, I suppose they even not know who or whom are the so-called white people. Real white people are not red necked with  pink skin. They are black haired more with olive skin, slim and tall people living in Caucasian mountains.
And most paradoxical thing is that those real white people whose outlook are handsome have encountered very serious racist attack  at the  hands of  those well feet red necked   skinheads.




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« Reply #35 on: August 28, 2007 »

Yes, latimeri.
I know what you are talking about, and I know you know what you are talking about. Racim is a desease of society.
Those skinheads just across the eastern border from you and the site of massive beatings was very close last year.
Remember the Winter War.
 
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« Reply #36 on: August 29, 2007 »

Better late than never. Yes, there is something very difficult to explain, For example, you are right they call themselves as ’ruskie, ruski, and it is the right term, The insult is  always  in the spirit to utter it when call them as ryssä, or russa, however it depend on occasion in which the word is used.

It's still not clear. If you say that the call themselves "ruskie" and "ruski" and it is Ok why it is bad when other call themselves so?
I'm used to word Russia and Russians and I don't have Russian friends to ask them about.
Byt the way, are you Russian?
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« Reply #37 on: August 29, 2007 »

Better late than never. Yes, there is something very difficult to explain, For example, you are right they call themselves as ’ruskie, ruski, and it is the right term, The insult is  always  in the spirit to utter it when call them as ryssä, or russa, however it depend on occasion in which the word is used.

It's still not clear. If you say that the call themselves "ruskie" and "ruski" and it is Ok why it is bad when other call themselves so?
I'm used to word Russia and Russians and I don't have Russian friends to ask them about.
Byt the way, are you Russian?

I think you never get it because, you haven’t, live among a nation which  have always been, and still is nearly 100 pre sent homogenise, the history of that region in which that nation lives have bee more or les full of fear, conflict and suspicion against the superpower whis lies behind the bordder, so when people uttered the word Ryssä’ there is very common sense of malevolent in it.

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